MAKING of love - INTENSE Poem

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The making of love - INTENSE Poem

by Alexander Thandi Ubani


It has been a longtime, my love
As if time ran with speed
Bringing to memory those precious moments
Clouding my vision and thoughts
I dream of you everyday




My baby, i am back
Oh how lovely you look
Sweet and loving like a PRINCESS
Your eyes sexy like a goddess

Come, let me taste your scent
Give me that sweet saliva
Drown me with your hot sweat

Oh how supple your skin have become
So fresh and enticing
Those sweet lips so inviting
Big breast, soft, firm and tender

Cry out in joy and whisper into my ears
Tease me with your lips and make my body quake in your warmth
Speak to me the language of lust
Let me fill that spot with my firmness


My heart pounds
My body ache
I beg to explode
Shouting to release my soul of that sweet burden.

As i slide inside you in ecstacy
Please, speak to me in many tongues
Hold me so firm, shout, cry and moan
Release that flame and let it bring me to climax




Twist, turn and shout
Dance to a foreign tone
Your body is a bundle of pleasure
Your lips are made of honey
Now, as i twist and quake, i give you my life
Take my milk of life cos i love you forever.

[c]copyright 2011 - Ubani Alexander Thandi

Comments

Binaya.Ghimire 9 months ago

You woke up my senses, my friend.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

hahaha, glad i did. one thing i love about poetry is the use of imagery, a combination of words can titillate the mind and bring out streams of emotion. thanks for gracing this page with such great words. have fun my good friend.

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Frank Atanacio Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

JUST DAMN HOT! UP AND UPSOME!

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Sunnie Day Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Its a good morning here in hubville..:)

Very sweet!

Sunnie

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

My ever effervescent Frank, how ve you been? I am thrilled with your fascinating comments. Best of wishes

my dear sweet Sunnie, good morning to you. How was the might? Hope sweet. May your day be ever blessed. Thanks for your support. Bless you

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HattieMattieMae Level 7 Commenter 9 months ago

Very nice! :)

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

Hattie, your awesome remark is well appreciated. Bless you

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jujubees 9 months ago

sweet, romantic, hot and steamy....i guess that says it all...what could be better!!!!! agh....memories....now i need to go find myself a stud!!!! haha!!! keep writing...

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

Haha, juju. You re one funny sweet friend. Becareful that's all. Thanks for the sweet comment. I will always remember. Take care

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Phew, It suddenly warmed up, need to turn the ole AC higher. HaHa

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

Haha, that is what am talking about. Glad, you could come by and leave this interesting comment. I love you ma'am

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Micky Dee Level 4 Commenter 9 months ago

Yes. Passion. Love.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

It is micky, micky and micky all the way. Bravo great writer cos your comment is a delicacy. I am thrilled. Be blessed

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Movie Master Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Hot stuff! love it!

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makusr Level 7 Commenter 9 months ago

Ubanichijioke,

My friend, My guide,

The intensity is awesome

As i slide inside you in ecstacy

Please, speak to me in many tongues

Hold me so firm, shout, cry and moan

Release that flame and let it bring me to climax

Ubani your words are ecstatic,

Lots of Love,

MAKUSR

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

Dear MM, my most sincerest of gratitude goes to you. May you continue to blessed.

Dear Makusr, you have a kind heart and always ready to show compassion. I guarantee you my ever willing support anytime and any day. Be blessed beyond your imagination. Best of wishes

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Sueswan Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Ubanichijioke,

Hot, smouldering and passionate!

It left me breathless.

Voted up, up and away.

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marcoujor Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

Ubanichijioke,

Your confidence is showing and it becomes you! This is simply divine- Voted UP & AB! Proud of you, mar.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

What other way can i use to thank this high profile comment[s]?

To my dear Sueswan, an adorable woman of your pedigree makes the heart of the strongest of men melt. Bless you

¤and to you marcoujor, how lovely you ve become, beautiful, smart, intelligent & awesome. Keep being the best of the best cos it is your gift. Be blessed forever¤

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Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 9 months ago

(fanning myself!) Very well expressed passion! Like watching a volcano erupt!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 9 months ago

That's a sign of approval. Getting that from you mean so much. Your kind words re like ink to my pen, please bless me with it. Thanks for your motivational comment. I am so happy

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Sweets21 Level 2 Commenter 9 months ago

Whew! What an explosion of passion this poem is! Very...lovely? Sexy? Beautiful? I can't choose just one!

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Nellieanna Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Yes it is. There is a fine precise delineation for poetry which portrays a strong beautiful sensuality expressed with good taste and yours manages it well.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Dear Tara, your words are as sweet as honey and pleasing to my soul. Thanks.

Dear sweet Nellieanna, you ve provided me the intellectual foresight. I will always follow your lead. Bless you ma

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Sweets21 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

No thanks needed they are very much deserved, as always you don't disappoint.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

I will always look up to you for help and comfort. Blessed is Tara.

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Sweets21 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

You are that is blessed!

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AEvans Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

Well that opened up all of my senses! That is certainly compassion and love! :)

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Tara, God bless you.

AEvans, thanks for the sweet comment. I appreciate. Bless you

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Darknlovely3436 Level 5 Commenter 8 months ago

Love your style with the poems,

profound, You are becoming a poet of the century

blessed

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Sweets21 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

May God bless you always!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Ha ha ha, darknlovely, you re flattering me. People of your worth can only stand with the ELITE. Be blessed

my dear Tara, continue to be gorgeous and lovely. Peace, joy and happiness is yours forever. Bless you

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Seeker7 Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Not a lot I can say about this wonderful piece of work except - Wow! Wow Wow!!! Love it!!! Have bookmarked as a favourite - sensational poem!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

I just smiled like a newborn baby reading this comment. Wow! You can use words perfectly. Am still happy having read this awesome comment. Be blessed my dear friend

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sheabutt3r Level 1 Commenter 8 months ago

This is a truly vivid piece of work with passion dripping from one line to the next. Your words paint artworks within the mind. You are definately a gifted writer. I look forword to reading you other hubs.

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camdjohnston12 8 months ago

Clear and lovely words.

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Sun-Girl Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

Awesome piece of work which i so much enjoy and really love your style of writing.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

A star studded comment[s].

To gorgeous sheabutt3r, awesome camdjohnston, and my sweet sun-Girl, your kind and loving comments reflects the peace, joy and love in your hearts. May God the almighty continue to keep you all safe and also shower you all with his blessings. Bless you all

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acaetnna Level 6 Commenter 8 months ago

What can I say but AWESOME - wonderful!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Dear Acaetnna, i am so pleased by your kind comment. You ve surely delighted my soul. Bless you

jami l. pereira 8 months ago

I am certainly glad the cold shower is here ! ... This was deep , intense and so full of emotion from such a gifted poet ! , amazing visual imagery ! great write ! voted up ,awesome and beautiful because it is!:)

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Thanks Jami, a true poet, writer and scholar like you give me the morale and impetus to flourish. Blessed is your soul

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TattooKitty Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

Wow...very seductive and sensual piece! Definitely a poem that should be read aloud since the emotions held within flow sweetly off the tongue!

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Heart Felt Book Level 1 Commenter 8 months ago

very intense work here my dear I truly enjoyed reading this passionate hub. keep moving forward!!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

To my sweet Tattookitty

&

my ever adorable Heart Felt Book,

you two are like diamond and your words like sugar. I am forever indebted to your generosity. Your kind words re laced with honey.

Peace to you two and abundance a triple fold. Bless you two

lostwithinmyself 8 months ago

Wow Felt The Passion!

Great Poem!!

x

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Thanks sweet lostwithinmysoul, i appreciate the kind comment. You re awesome. Bless you

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epigramman 8 months ago

..there is also a making of lovely words here courtesy of you my friend - and 'intense' is definitely a style which suits you very well - obviously you have charmed the laides here and perhaps the men like me can learn from you ......

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Dear ever loving and kind Epi, you ve comforted me with those sweet, heart-warming and happy words. Bless you Sire.

I am ever willing to continue learning from you.

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Debby Bruck Level 7 Commenter 8 months ago

This sounds like you love someone very much, Ubanchijoke. Hold her dear to you.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Thanks my dear Debby, being in love brings to your mind array of feelings. Thanks for coming by. Bless you

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Eparisi679 Level 2 Commenter 8 months ago

::takes out fan:: WHEW!!! Love this!!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Thanks lovely Eparisi., your kind comment mean so much to me. I am delighted cos you like it. Peace to you dear.

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Eiddwen 8 months ago

Beautiful indeed ubani.

You are such a caring and beautiful writer and I for one am so glad to have the chance to follow and read your work on here.

Take care

Eiddwen.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

I am so glad and proud of you Eiddwen. You stand among the ELITE because you re a source of upliftment, courage, strength and motivation to us all. You deserve a medal. Thanks for your sweet words. Am humbled.

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sonia05 Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

what an erotic,sensuous and hot poem!!! Its smouldering,exhilirating and simply awesome!!!

voted up!

naturalsolutions Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

All poems about love are really inspiring. At somehow or sometimes, it make us feel in love even we don't have a partner. That is the magic of word comes from a loving and romantic heart.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Dear sonia., your words are divine and magical. Did you go to school to learn that? Wow! I love it. Please be blessed

dear natural solutions, you speak the truth. Love when spoken in a great way is infectious. I hope you ve been touched by the sweet breeze of love this day. I wish you a love-packed day. Bless you

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Denise Handlon Level 8 Commenter 8 months ago

Luscious and igniting...and you expect me to fall asleep after reading this? LOL

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Ha ha ha, Denise you did it. You forced out a smile on my face with your sweet words. Thanks for coming and making my face beam with smiles. I hope you had sweet dreams throughout. Wishing you all the best. Lots of love.

naturalsolutions Level 4 Commenter 8 months ago

Yes, I'm really touched by your poem. I could read it repeatedly all day. I'm so excited to feel that feeling again.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 8 months ago

Dear natural solutions, i am glad you for those kind and inspirational comments. Be blessed

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Ruchira Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

oo-lala---it sure is hot and intense :)

Good one ubanichijioke!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

I hope it ain't too hot. Glad you love the poem. Bless you

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Darknlovely3436 Level 5 Commenter 7 months ago

had to read it again.

no icecream love,

just hot peppery love forever

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Ardie Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Whoo! I blushed while reading this. I felt like I was peeping in on something very private between you and your love. Awesome imagery!

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Happyboomernurse Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Such a sweet innocent picture for a very erotic poem. Voted up, awesome and beautiful. Would have voted "hot" but there's no such button.

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Ardie Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Happyboomernurse,

LoL! I thought the same thing when I saw the cartoon-y picture :) So I was very caught off guard when I read the poem. But I loved it

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

A great thanks to darkandlovely,

many cheers to sweet Ardie,

and a delightful thanks to happyboomernurse.

Three sweet, adorable and gorgeous ladies. I am so blessed having all of you as mentor, teacher and guide. I am happy for all the kind and sweet comments. May you all remain blessed

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Many thanks to you three adorable, pretty and lovely ladies. I am so thrilled. Be you all forever blessed

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chrisam01 Level 4 Commenter 7 months ago

Your words seem to have woken up everyone here in hubland. I'm glad I didn't miss this one. Voted up! And I can't wait to read more.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Dear chrisam, am glad you could say that and even spared time to read and comment. Am blessed having you as a friend. Be blessed

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thelyricwriter Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Whoa there friend, I can't stay long as I must go find my wife. Votes up....

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Wow! A great comment. I wish you all the best dear friend. Peace to you & your heartrob. All the best.

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A.A. Zavala Level 7 Commenter 7 months ago

Very passionate, sensual, erotic. You get it, and understand how intoxicating true intimacy can be. I've linked this to the series or erotic poetry written. Thank you for sharing.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Thanks A.A for that excellent and passionate comment. Am thrilled and elated and do wish you all the best. May you be blessed. Take good care my dear friend

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MartieCoetser Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Uban, you've written this with flair. Reveals the way a man experience his woman - impressive. These two phrases made in particular an impact on me.

"As i slide inside you in ecstacy

Please, speak to me in many tongues"

I'm linking this to my poem in the shade of erotica. And, of course, voted sky high.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Thanks Martie for the awesome, inspiring and uplifting comment. Am so privileged and delighted. You re awesome and a great poet too.

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homesteadbound Level 8 Commenter 7 months ago

Wow! I have a lump in my throat! I will always be your fan! Really .... well .... really hot and intense indeed!

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Wow! Dear homesteadbound, am so glad to read you comment and happy you could say that. I am so blessed having you around. Be blessed

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lyns 7 months ago

Very intense, can feel the emotions in this poem, I wonder how I missed this one, very romantic... Thumbs up, Awesome, Interesting, thanks for sharing another one of your emotion driving poems. 12:31am 10/27

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jacqui2011 Level 7 Commenter 7 months ago

Again another masterpiece. You seem to write with intensity, emotion and romance with such ease. Great hub from one of the greatest. I always look forward to reading your work. Best wishes. Voted up and awesome (as ever).

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AmaTainted Level 4 Commenter 7 months ago

i do not know your voice but i could hear it...

i could feel my soft lady parts being pressed to you hard manly parts...

i could feel the heartbeat shared between lovers...

i could smell the bliss...

im dream, i was lost!

beautiful work!

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Marj Lago 7 months ago

butterflies in my stomach while reading this poem :)

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HikeGuy Level 4 Commenter 7 months ago

Stunning! Sensual, radiant -- a celebration of blissful union. Filled with love, honor and full connection. Powerful words, my friend. Even my toes are warmer after reading your intense poem -- and it's a chilly day in California. Such talent! Voted Beautiful & Awesome.

-- Trent

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Thanks my ever loving Lyns. Am glad to read such dear and sweet comment. Hope you re doing well? Wishing you all the best. Hugs

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

To my lovely

Jacqui,

sweet Ama,

Adorable Marj,

wonderful Hike,

i lack words to convey my gratitude.

But i know that you all

will forever remain

dear to me.

Love you all sweet people.

Lots of love

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Wow! Ama, that was too erotic! Ahhh, so so moving.

What can i say? Am speechless.

((((Put on the fan))))

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 7 months ago

Dear Hike guy, i hope it ain't too cold.

Please, try and cover yourself.

All the best.

Dear Marj, i hope you re fine dear.

Have a great day.

All the best too.

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htodd 6 months ago

Great information..

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 6 months ago

Thanks, htodd.

I wish you all the best.

Have a great day.

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calpol25 Level 5 Commenter 3 months ago

This poem is awesome love it :-)

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 3 months ago

Thanks my dear friend for the wonderful comment. Be blessed

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CloudExplorer Level 8 Commenter 4 weeks ago

What a way to open you poetic self of expression, its awesome to let go at times, and not feel all bottled up, great job at fully letting it out Ubanichijioke, Nice one!

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crystolite 4 weeks ago

I love it...you are quite a great writer. Nice poem, voted up. Cheers.

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tillsontitan Level 8 Commenter 4 weeks ago

I don't know why it took me so long to find this one, it should've been burning a hole in hub pages! I guess after reading this everyone has the same thought...I have to go find my husband.

Erotic yet tasteful. Good job Ubie! Up all the way.

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Great thanks to Cloudexplorer for that awesome, sweet and wonderful comment. You re my motivator. Love you

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 4 weeks ago

Ðë?? Crystolite, you ve really ????????

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de my day ?with that wonderful comment. May you forever be blessed. ?? blessed

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ubanichijioke Hub Author 4 weeks ago

My dear sweet Till, you just left me speechless and full of smiles. ?what can i say or do to show appreciation? You re a darling. Bless youu soo much.

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